You use generalization or abstract language, seldom including personal details and comments. While the piece may be correct, it lacks the personal touch. The voice seems bland, careful, a little flat, and not very interesting.

• 你不是笼统概括就是使用抽象语言,很少提出你个人的分析评论。文章可能正确无误,可是缺乏你个人的特色。调子显得平淡无奇,过于拘谨,较为单调乏味,不能引人入胜。