They always said that what Halberstam needed was a good editor, his sentences ran on and on, he piled phrase upon phrase and clause upon clause, he used commas the way other men used periods.

• 大家经常认为哈伯斯塔姆需要一个好编辑，他的句子越来越长，堆彻短语，套用各种从句，其它人用句号的时候他却用逗号。”