After I showed him just how visual his message could be, he went back to the drawing board, dismantled his existing presentation, and reduced it to about 10 image-rich slides.

• 当我演示给他看他的信息可以是多么的清晰时，他就从头做起，废除了原先的演讲方案，然后将其删减为10张以图片为主的幻灯片。